慰问信英语考研

慰问信 时间:2017-09-05 我要投稿

  慰问信英语考研 1

  例题:

  Directions:

  Suppose Bill, one of your friends, was knocked down by a car yesterday and is in hospital now. Write him a letter to

  1)express your pity, and

  2)provide your help.

  You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

  Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

  Do not write the address.

  题目所给的规定情景是你的一个朋友bill昨天被车撞了,如今正在医院治疗,要求你写一封慰问信,向他表示同情并提供帮助。根据上面所提的慰问信写作“三步走”策略,具体操作如下:

  首段:I am so sorry to learn of the unfortunate news that you were knocked down by a car yesterday. I wish there were something I could say or do to soften your grief.

  在“三步走”策略中,第一步就是要表明写信目的并且简述事由。前面介绍过的几封信中在表明目的、简述事由时多用I am writing this letter to express…, 而在慰问信这样一种对感情要求相对更高的书信中,对感情的需求最为迫切,所以首先就要最快地表达出同情之情,之后再在后面阐述进行慰问的事由。

  除此之外,在做完以上两项工作后,大家还需另一项工作,也就是像感谢信中那样,进一步强化情感。在慰问信中,自然是需要强化这种慰问同情之情的,同样还是要用到虚拟语气。

  中段:A little package from me will reach you in the next day or so. I hope you will like it, and it could be useful at your present moment. What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.

  慰问信本身的性质及其应用功能就决定了我们在写第二段时不能像前面的几封书信那样去具体解释原因,而是要尽量避免一再地提起别人的不幸。相反,在这种情况下我们反而需要为处于困难中的收信人尽可能地提供自己的帮助,成为对方的坚强后盾。同时,表明自己的帮助时,需注意做到实虚结合。

  尾段:I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back. Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.

  本段中,依然如上面第二段中提到的那样,我们不能一再地表明自己对对方遭遇不幸的同情之情,所以在此只能表达自己对对方的美好期望,期待对方好转等。除此之外,还需再次表明自己永远帮助支持对方的决心,为对方增加面对困难的信心。

  在考研英语的书信表达中,类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富,大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累,并在写作中加以运用:

  1、I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of your illness.

  2、We are very sorry to learn of…

  3、In the next few days I think you should have a good rest and take the doctor’s advice.

  4、If there is anything I can do, give me a call.

  5、With the best wishes for your quick and complete recovery.

  因此,该题的完整范文如下:

  Dear Bill,

  I am so sorry to learn of the unfortunate news that you were knocked down by a car yesterday. I wish there were something I could say or do to soften your grief.

  A little package from me will reach you in the next day or so. I hope you will like it, and it could be useful at your present moment. What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.

  I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back. Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  慰问信英语考研 2

  常用句式:

  1、We are very sorry to learn of…

  我们非常遗憾地获悉……

  2、I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of your illness.

  得知你生病的消息我非常难过。

  3、In the next few days I think you should have a good rest and take the doctor‘s advice.

  在接下来的几天内,你要好好休息,牢记医嘱。

  4、With the best wishes for your quick and complete recovery.

  希望你早日康复。

  5、If there is anything I can do, give me a call.

  如果有我能帮忙的,请打电话通知我。

  倡议信“写作三步曲”:

  自我介绍以及倡议或呼吁的内容→进一步解释你所阐述的内容,比如介绍你倡议或呼吁的行为有什么好处以及不好的影响→再一次的呼吁或倡议。

  范文解析:

  Directions: As a volunteer of environmental protection, write a letter to advocate bus-taking. In your letter, you should

  1) state the aim of your writing,

  2) introduce the advantage(s) of bus-taking.

  You should write about 100 words on ANSWER WHEET 2. Dot sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Wang Hua”instead. Do not write the address.

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I, the undersigned, am a senior of Shandong University. As a volunteer of environmental protection, I am writing to advocate bus-taking.

  We can see that bus-taking has many advantages. In terms of environmental protection, it reduces waste-gas emission from private cars. Besides, it helps cut down the energy consumption. Most importantly, this method can ease traffic jam and lower our transportation, this method can ease traffic jam and lower our transportation fee. Generally speaking, bus-taking helps promote the harmony between human beings and nature.

  Let‘s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. Your cooperation would be much appreciated.

  Yours sincerely,

  Wang Hua

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