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六级写作经典范文及点评
Speaking of the Devil
Why do smart, articulate, and self-confident people often become terrified in front of a group? How could death rank just seventh in a national survey of the top ten experiences Americans dread most, and public speaking first? Think about it: We’d rather kick the bucket than address an audience①!
It starts in elementary school when a teacher singles us out to “speak up”. Remember the panic of producing the wrong answer? Our palms sweated, we might have been short of breath， and filled with trembling knees, nausea, a stomachache, and a rapid heartbeat. We felt awkward and dumb.
As adults, we’re still afraid we’ll make fools of ourselves. We worry that listeners will think we are lightweights. And we should worry.
Public speaking isn’t just a sweet skill to have. Being a first-rate orator can lead to job promotions and personal advancement, while being a lousy one is a disadvantage.
One way to feel more comfortable on the stage is by checking out the room in advance, observing the set-up, and testing any equipment you’ll be using.
Some speaking specialists suggest opening with a provocative question, or a recent news event that relates to your topic. Other coaches think adding a little tasteful humor can liven up the talk if the subject is suitable.
As important as the words is the delivery. A study of audience reaction to speeches revealed that listeners remember just 7 percent of what is said, 38% of how it is said，and 55% of the speaker’s body language.
And speaking of anxiety, some people like to get up in front of a group, but most don’t As Mark Twain once said, “There are two kinds of speakers: those that are nervous and those that are liars.”
行文点评
本文本身就是一篇很好的演说稿。文章语言生动,很贴近听众,如文中出现的kick the bucket 这样的俚语。文章以问句形式开始, 首句用一个why提出疑问：我们为什么害怕在众人面前发言？从而吸引读者继续聆听克服演讲恐惧的建议。
第二、三段就此问题谈了对公众演讲惧怕的原因。作者按照时间顺序，首先在第二段描写了小时候产生恐慌的具体表现和原因，很容易让听众联想到自己的亲身经历。接着在下一段说明惧怕公众演讲的原因和消极影响。作者非常自然地在第四、五段提出了几点克服演讲恐惧的建议。其中One way to..., Some suggest... Other think... 这样的句型把作者的几点建议自然分开，使文章内容连贯紧凑。第六段首句用一个as...as...句型引出与演讲内容同样重要的内容传递方式。最后文章以马克
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