英语作文及评析

英语作文范文及评析

　　中考英语作文范文及评析:记叙文

　　【习作要求】

　　根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上，句数不限；中文提示内容不必逐句翻译。

　　一个雨天，李莉乘出租车回家。在车里她发现司机在学英语。他对李莉说了些什么? 此事对你学习英语有何启发? 为支持北京奥运你打算做些什么?

　　(1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi

　　(2) in the car, find, was learning English

　　(3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

　　(4) I think... to show support （n.支持）for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

　　【中考英语作文范文】

　　One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: "I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games." I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to learn English well at school. And I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

　　一个下雨天，李立乘出租车回家。她在车上发现司机在学英语。他对李立说：“我在上学的时候英语很差。我现在在努力工作帮助北京2008奥运会。“我想我应该从驾驶中学习。英语对我们来说是非常重要的因为它在全世界广泛使用。作为一个学生，我会尽我最大的努力学好英语学校。我要尽可能多地展示2008北京奥运会的支持，说英语。

　　【名师点评】

　　第一句很重要，以便确定全文时态。句与句之间要连贯。关键句要用上，如：I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

　　(1) 格式：简介

　　(2) 人称：第三人称

　　(3) 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时

　　(4) 短语、句式、句型：短语与句式已给出，句型包括简单句、直接引语、宾语从句

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