英文作文修改技巧解析
一、英语作文的等级
四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分
三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分
二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分
一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分
二、英语作文修改案例
案例一：
a trip to the zoo
原稿：
yesterday way sunday and it was a fine day.so i take a trip to the zoo. i went there by bus, i get there at 8:00 am.there are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, others watched the bids,i saw many animals and i tool many phtos. that’s a interesting trip. i’ll never forget it. that’s my trip.
修改后：
it was a sunny sunday after a quick breakfast , i couldn’t wait to get on the bus. this is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!
as soon as i got there, i was attracted at once. monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. how naughty they were! what’s more, i was also intersted in the tigers. they are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . i t came to my mind immiediatly.
anyway, i had an interesting trip today . it gave me a deep impression, i’ll never forget it.
案例二：
my favourite season
原稿：
there are four seasons in a year. and my favourite season is summer. although it’s very hot. i still love it .because i can swim in the sea .and lie in sun . that’s very comfortable.and i also can eat some icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. that’s very intersting. so i love summer. that’s my favourite season.
修改后
my favourite season
as is all know , there are four seasons. speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.
many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, lying on the b
each … how comfortable ! more importantly i can eat delicious icecream . of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. and i’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .
in a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .
三、英语作文修改的注意事项
1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.
2、语法的.修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.
3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.
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