simon先生的大作文写作方法

simon先生的大作文写作方法

　　大作文写作，怎么样将这个比较有难度的话题斩于马下，试试下面的方法。

　　[导读时间]

　　这是一个典型的“problem+solution”题型的雅思话题。

　　在结构上非常适合4段式的雅思作文结构：导入+问题+解决办法+总结，所以，在5分钟的审题阶段里，首先可以确定的是文章结构。

　　其次是导入段里的全文观点句，然后就是文章主体的两段——“问题段”和“解决方法段”的主题句，如果这几步都非常顺利，继续细化下去，就要针对段落的主题句，写支撑它的2-3个观点句。

　　也就是说这是一般雅思写作前的头脑风暴时间里要确定的4件事：1.文章结构;2.全文立场;3主体段主题句;4主体段观点句。

　　当然这说的是最理想的一种情况。

　　在临场条件下，根据自身的状态和话题的难易度，可以省略4，甚至是3。

　　但是，对于想拿7+分数的同学，1,2是绝对不能略过的。

　　好了，对于这个话题，解读至此，现在看考官的范文，看他是如何处理的。

　　[范文时间]

　　1. Cities are often seen as places ofopportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a largemetropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city lifefor the average inhabitant.

　　2. The main problem for anyone who hopes tomigrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higherthan it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higherprices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areastend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates incomparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is oftenpoor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transportsystems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy andstressful.

　　3. However, there are various steps thatgovernments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could investmoney in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost ofliving. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centresand promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduceboth air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, theintroduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the trafficproblem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas,by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressureon major cities.

　　4. In conclusion, governments couldcertainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for allcity residents.

　　[高分词句时间]

　　首段：places of opportunity机会之地 in a large metropolis在一个大都市里 theaverage inhabitant 普通居民(注意是单数形式)

　　二段：cost of living生活成本 pay higher prices for housing为住房支付更高的费用

　　suffer from social problems 遭遇社会问题

　　poverty rates贫困率 poor airquality空气质量差

　　pollution from traffic交通污染 public transport systems公共交通系统

　　三段：social housing社会福利住房 ban vehicles from city centres 在市中心禁车

　　cleaner public transport更为环保的公共交通 acongestion charge征收交通费

　　curb the traffic problem遏制交通问题develop provincial towns发展省级市镇 reduce the pressure on减少压力

　　四段：enhance the quality of life提高生活质量 cityresidents城市居民

　　[分析行文的思路]

　　1. First paragraph gives a backgroundinformation and a statement

　　(导入段由“背景信息+全文观点”构成)

　　2 . In second paragraph , problems arestated one after another by using linking words(用衔接词串联起了3个观点句，并在点出了主题句)

　　The main problem ...is that

　　Another issue is that

　　Furthermore

　　As a result

　　需要重点说一下。

　　simon自己在这一段承认了，故意没有按照传统的方式在段首摆出主题句，而是直接地接二连三用了3个观点句，来讲城市生活的3个问题。

　　并最后得出了一个城市生活的总体的弊端“unhealthy and stressful”,这一句可以认为是全文的主题句。

　　3.In third paragraph ,there is a topicsentence after that measures are suggested for government(标准的主题段写法：主题句+观点句+其中夹杂1个栗子)

　　However + topic sentence

　　Firstly

　　Secondly + one example

　　A third option would be ( to do ...)

　　这一段的衔接词，可以说和第二段的衔接词相应呈辉，非别是“the main+another+furthermore"和”firstly+secondly+third“。

　　采用了副词+形容词组合使用来表达次序，没有丝毫的重复感，并且非常流畅，值得大家学习和模范。

　　4. Conclusion paragraph is very short butcut to the point(总结段简短而切题)

　　总结段依然按照习惯的1句式，简洁明了。

　　[总结simon极简主义写作文风]

　　simon曾总结过自己的雅思大作文4段13句模板，屡试不爽，可以用于所有的题型，所有的话题。

　　Introduction(开头段): 2句

　　First main body paragraph(主体段1): 5 句

　　Second main body paragraph(主体段2): 5 句

　　Conclusion(结尾): 1 句

　　这是我知道的唯一的行得通的雅思写作满分模板，simon用这种他最擅长的方式写了各种范文，字数一般在270左右，很少超过300字。

　　可见，字数真的说明不了什么，读他的作文，最大的体会就是，真的是没什么废话呀!

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